[Cz-physics] The [[Temperature]] article needs a thorugh editing by an expert in that field

[mbeychok]

The Citizendium article entitled "Temperature" sorely needs a thorough 
editing to correct any errors, to simplify it and to shorten it. At the 
moment, it is (in my opinion) a typical messy Wikipedia article that was 
transferred to Citizendium. Is there some experienced physicist who 
would take on that job??
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