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4 February 2011

  • curprev 14:0914:09, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,373 bytes −4‎ forgot to delete another word
  • curprev 14:0814:08, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,377 bytes −44‎ I don't see why we need the words "state lines" in the first place
  • curprev 14:0714:07, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 10,421 bytes −121‎ Ro, "state line" simply means "boundary line" and it is a singular noun rather than plural. Lake Tahoe's east shore is in Nevada, west shore in California.
  • curprev 13:3813:38, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 10,393 bytes +118‎ I'm a foreigner, & I don't understand this location
  • curprev 12:4812:48, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,389 bytes +114‎ Put, in the lede, where it should be in any newspaper article, the *reason* Owens Lake is worthy of inclusion here.
  • curprev 12:4312:43, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,275 bytes −267‎ removed some text from lede -- this article is about Owens Lake, not Tahoe
  • curprev 12:1512:15, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 10,542 bytes +1,330‎ No edit summary
  • curprev 12:1412:14, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 10,537 bytes −8,518‎ Rewrote akward sentence and gave a location from Reno, NV
  • curprev 02:1402:14, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 10,245 bytes 0‎ Reduced the image size a teensy bit so that "(particulate matter)" isn't on the lede's last line all by itself. Just a style thing.
  • curprev 00:2300:23, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,245 bytes +35‎ rewriting the lede again, forgot to save it the first time

3 February 2011

2 February 2011

  • curprev 23:5723:57, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,788 bytes −117‎ Shortened coding of 2 more references. Also tightened up the edit page to delete space between sentences.
  • curprev 18:3018:30, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 9,905 bytes −3‎ seems to be 1 word
  • curprev 15:5815:58, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,908 bytes 0‎ Shortened coding for another reference
  • curprev 14:2714:27, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,908 bytes +729‎ →‎Air pollution: Adding updated info
  • curprev 03:2303:23, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 9,179 bytes −267‎ Revised about another half of the references to use much shorter coding so that the Edit page is more easily read. Finished with this now.
  • curprev 02:1602:16, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,446 bytes −35‎ Revised about half of the references to use much shorter coding so that the Edit page is more easily read.

1 February 2011

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