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Still improving the article and waiting for more reference books to arrive, but I believe it to be a considerable improvement. Both [[National Socialism]] and [[The Holocaust]] also need work. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 02:19, 16 December 2010 (UTC) | Still improving the article and waiting for more reference books to arrive, but I believe it to be a considerable improvement. Both [[National Socialism]] and [[The Holocaust]] also need work. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 02:19, 16 December 2010 (UTC) | ||
: I just compared the first paragraph of the new version with the first paragraph of the "old" version. The old version is much better suited as an introduction: It does what an introduction should do -- it summarises the main facts, while the new one compares him with Stalin, a comparison that (at most) makes sense in context much later. --[[User:Peter Schmitt|Peter Schmitt]] 02:03, 20 December 2010 (UTC) | : I just compared the first paragraph of the new version with the first paragraph of the "old" [http://en.citizendium.org/wiki?title=Adolf_Hitler&oldid=100736814 version]. The old version is much better suited as an introduction: It does what an introduction should do -- it summarises the main facts, while the new one compares him with Stalin, a comparison that (at most) makes sense in context much later. --[[User:Peter Schmitt|Peter Schmitt]] 02:03, 20 December 2010 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 20:06, 19 December 2010
OK, moved in the rewrite and archived earlier talk
Still improving the article and waiting for more reference books to arrive, but I believe it to be a considerable improvement. Both National Socialism and The Holocaust also need work. Howard C. Berkowitz 02:19, 16 December 2010 (UTC)
- I just compared the first paragraph of the new version with the first paragraph of the "old" version. The old version is much better suited as an introduction: It does what an introduction should do -- it summarises the main facts, while the new one compares him with Stalin, a comparison that (at most) makes sense in context much later. --Peter Schmitt 02:03, 20 December 2010 (UTC)