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The wikipedia version is pretty good and well-cited.  Does anyone have a strong opinion about starting fresh or starting from the WP model?--[[User:Peter A. Lipson|Peter A. Lipson]] 22:50, 27 April 2007 (CDT)
==Plan==
 
I used the WP version at first for a framework, and the section of hemorrhage is mostly their content, however, the WP version is extremely unclear, so this is turning into a major rewrite.  I'm not sure what level of discourse we are aiming at (somewhere between layperson and medical professional?) I think external links at the end may help send people of different levels to different resources.  Im still having trouble finding public domain images.  I would especially like to find an illustration of plaque/thrombus, a ct or mr image, and a few others.  Thanks. [[User:Peter A. Lipson|Peter A. Lipson]] 16:46, 28 April 2007 (CDT)
I changed my assessment...the WP version is not all that clear, but Im using as a basis for this one in a sandbox on my user page.  FYI--[[User:Peter A. Lipson|Peter A. Lipson]] 23:19, 27 April 2007 (CDT)
 
BTW, my spelling, when correct, is American Standard, but I'm not wedded to that, as long as the whole article is either Commonwealth or American for the sake of consistency.--[[User:Peter A. Lipson|Peter A. Lipson]] 23:40, 27 April 2007 (CDT)
 
 
This is turning into a much more extensive rewrite than I thought (from WP).  I'll add images later...im having trouble finding good public domain stuff.--[[User:Peter A. Lipson|Peter A. Lipson]] 15:33, 28 April 2007 (CDT)

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Article Checklist for "Stroke"
Workgroup category or categories Health Sciences Workgroup [Categories OK]
Article status Developing article: beyond a stub, but incomplete
Underlinked article? Yes
Basic cleanup done? Yes
Checklist last edited by Petréa Mitchell 11:51, 28 April 2007 (CDT)

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Plan

I used the WP version at first for a framework, and the section of hemorrhage is mostly their content, however, the WP version is extremely unclear, so this is turning into a major rewrite. I'm not sure what level of discourse we are aiming at (somewhere between layperson and medical professional?) I think external links at the end may help send people of different levels to different resources. Im still having trouble finding public domain images. I would especially like to find an illustration of plaque/thrombus, a ct or mr image, and a few others. Thanks. Peter A. Lipson 16:46, 28 April 2007 (CDT)

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