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::::::I would not have had any problem if you had asked, on the talk page, "why is it significant that Cerf endorsed Obama?" It could have been explained that demonstrated Cerf's continued frustration with Republican approaches to science. If need be, that could have gone into the article. Nevertheless, I do not think it was appropriate to remove something where you admit ignorance of it. Ask, don't act; deletions are especially inappropriate in the absence of specific background. Incidentally, Cerf was an adviser on two of my books and I've worked in committees with him for years; I do know something of the specific. There is a great more about the White House and science that can be brought up, which I differentiate from a personal moral decision, if a not terribly informed one, about stem cells. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 20:45, 12 August 2009 (UTC) | ::::::I would not have had any problem if you had asked, on the talk page, "why is it significant that Cerf endorsed Obama?" It could have been explained that demonstrated Cerf's continued frustration with Republican approaches to science. If need be, that could have gone into the article. Nevertheless, I do not think it was appropriate to remove something where you admit ignorance of it. Ask, don't act; deletions are especially inappropriate in the absence of specific background. Incidentally, Cerf was an adviser on two of my books and I've worked in committees with him for years; I do know something of the specific. There is a great more about the White House and science that can be brought up, which I differentiate from a personal moral decision, if a not terribly informed one, about stem cells. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 20:45, 12 August 2009 (UTC) | ||
Howard, I find your comments condescending and offensive. I have been careful and civil. My involvement in this whole thing was merely to tighten a brief section that had been left ungrammatical and unconnected. I restored the reference to Obama when you specifically requested it. I admitted ignorance on the specific topic and invited the opinions of betters. Yet I receive from you accusations and long tirades about how inferior my editing is and how smart you are. Fine, so you know more about the specific topic(s) involved; there is still no reason to address me in such a tone about something that can be fixed easily. I am a reasonably intelligent person who has received training in basic research methods. Any reasonable human being might have wondered how necessary it is to bring in Barack Obama in a discussion about a relatively unknown scientist in an article on George W. Bush. No irreparable harm was done by leaving that reference out, especially since I believe the overall effect of my editing, from a purely linguistic point of view, was that of an improvement. There is nothing inappropriate about any of my actions on that front; I do not ask permission for every bit and byte I change on CZ. You need to be grown up enough to communicate such matters in a normal way without getting upset when someone removes a word you happen to like. "If you don't want your writing to be edited by others and redistributed at will, then don't submit it here." [[User:Michel van der Hoek|Michel van der Hoek]] 22:59, 12 August 2009 (UTC) |
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Comments
This needs much improvement.
For starters, it should at least be stated that Bush lost the popular vote in his first election, though he won the the Electoral College.
The statement "reelected by 3 million majority over John Kerry in 2004" is misleading; the figure should include popular and electoral vote, and express the popular vote not only as a number, but as a percentage of votes cast (3 million makes the result sound less close than it was).
Russell Potter 15:50, 28 April 2007 (CDT)
- I just fixed it. :-)
- Looks much better! I do think it may be tricky to have the best overall information on a person who is still living and still serving as president -- that real estate boom may soon be (or may already be) a bust! -- but it's certainly worth trying. It will give us all a course of isometrics in the school of — (The Constabulary has removed an initialism here. Please use plain English instead, for example, "unbiased" or "neutral" ) —. Russell Potter 18:45, 28 April 2007 (CDT)
- I agree, the real estate thing and a lot of other "markers" were added by Richard. Also I don't know why the Plame intelligence leakage Affair and NSA wiretapping scandal were erased, are they not important enough? Yi Zhe Wu 19:55, 28 April 2007 (CDT)
- The Plame scandal was not important enough. (The prospect it would bring down Rove would make it impoirtant but that did NOT happen.) NSA wiretapping issue was minor affair likewise. The real estate boom affected tens of millions of people (and seems to have ended now, but was a major factor in the economy for years). What we have in the article is just a list of markers ("events" is not quite the word), with only a couple words on each. A real article on the Bush years will have a paragraph+ on each item. Richard Jensen 00:05, 29 April 2007 (CDT)
- Looks much better! I do think it may be tricky to have the best overall information on a person who is still living and still serving as president -- that real estate boom may soon be (or may already be) a bust! -- but it's certainly worth trying. It will give us all a course of isometrics in the school of — (The Constabulary has removed an initialism here. Please use plain English instead, for example, "unbiased" or "neutral" ) —. Russell Potter 18:45, 28 April 2007 (CDT)
Someone needs to invoke the neutrality principle for this article.
- Neutrality? that's unlikely given the high octane topic. There are no neutrals out there that we can cater to, in my opinion. The best we can do is list all the main issues right now. We have even STARTED to write the article. Richard Jensen 10:35, 29 April 2007 (CDT)
- What do ya mean by high octane? Is this an metaphorical expression? But I do agree that writing an article on the current president will get into a lot of neutrality issues, and it's very very hard to write about him neutrally. Anyways, we only need to wait till 2009 when he steps down any indeterminate issue about him will be resolved. Yi Zhe Wu 11:24, 29 April 2007 (CDT)
- "high octane" is an old-fashioned expression for an explosive issue that burns red hot. The article should avoid explicit partisanship --that is very hard for any one editor to do, but it might work out ok collectively. Richard Jensen 11:44, 29 April 2007 (CDT)
- What do ya mean by high octane? Is this an metaphorical expression? But I do agree that writing an article on the current president will get into a lot of neutrality issues, and it's very very hard to write about him neutrally. Anyways, we only need to wait till 2009 when he steps down any indeterminate issue about him will be resolved. Yi Zhe Wu 11:24, 29 April 2007 (CDT)
- Neutrality? that's unlikely given the high octane topic. There are no neutrals out there that we can cater to, in my opinion. The best we can do is list all the main issues right now. We have even STARTED to write the article. Richard Jensen 10:35, 29 April 2007 (CDT)
- A good example of explicit partisanship is the use of the political rhetoric "scandal" with the Attorney General's firings. US attorneys serve at the will of the president; other presidents have dismissed them for a variety of stated reasons, but most are partisan, whether stated or not. The terms here should be neutral to keep from taking sides in a political controversy. David L Green 22:16, 5 May 2007 (CDT)
- It's not a partisan issue. It's the Republicans in Senate (11 of 12 on Judiciary) who've attaCKED Bush and most called for Gonzales to resign. Richard Jensen 13:08, 6 May 2007 (CDT).
- A good example of explicit partisanship is the use of the political rhetoric "scandal" with the Attorney General's firings. US attorneys serve at the will of the president; other presidents have dismissed them for a variety of stated reasons, but most are partisan, whether stated or not. The terms here should be neutral to keep from taking sides in a political controversy. David L Green 22:16, 5 May 2007 (CDT)
Elections
- , winning 51% of the votes and a 3 million majority
U.S. presidents are not elected by popular sovereignty. Rather, the votes in each state are counted. Whoever "wins that state" gets all its electoral votes.
It is only a matter of historical curiousity, not constitutional significance, when a candidate gets a majority of electoral votes while an opponents gets a plurality of popular votes.
Agitation to change the Electoral college sometimes crops up, typically from partisons for the losing candidate. Perhaps we need an an article on election reform or Electoral college reform. --Ed Poor 11:22, 10 May 2007 (CDT)
- I disagree -- it is not merely a matter of historical curiosity who gets how many votes in the popular election. Obviously, with the Electoral College system with each state's slate of electors, the popular vote is rarely reflected by the Electoral College vote, although there have been a few instances where the winner of the popular vote won in the EC. Stating the facts in the matter (popular vote, electoral vote) seems the best, most neutral way to reflect this. Russell Potter 11:27, 10 May 2007 (CDT)
- I agree with Ed. It sounds like sour grapes. For example, would one say, "In a strike shortened season, including three wins by non-union scab players, the Washington Redskins won the Super Bowl." I think a better alternative would be to say, "The Washington Redskins defeated the Denver Broncos to win the Superbowl." And at some appropriate point mention the oddity of the strike-shortened season.
- Of course, if you think this detail about the popular vote is fair / important, why doesn't the Bill Clinton article mention that Clinton did not come close to winning a majority of the popular vote in either of his Presidential races? Will Nesbitt 07:46, 21 July 2007 (CDT)
Bin Laden and 9/11
I have moved the article away from saying that UBL actually directed the attacks to what I believe is strictly accurate: that he has claimed responsibility for them. If this is wrong, revert. I have also mentioned the repercussions of the Iraq war. John Stephenson 02:47, 15 May 2007 (CDT)
Photo to illustrate (foreign) opposition
The photo to the right can perhaps go on a section about opposition to George W. Bush and his administration. Or not. It's there if anyone wants it in the article. John Stephenson 03:02, 15 May 2007 (CDT)
- American Presidents have been protested across the world in a good many places. I would oppose this picture because it would take more than a thousand words to put this into context and proper perspective. Similarly, I think it would be silly to show Bush being mobbed like a rock star by crying overjoyed supporters in Armenia. Will Nesbitt 07:38, 21 July 2007 (CDT)
- I think it could find a place somewhere, though the article is yet to develop sufficiently for it to be included. (And to agree with Will for once... you're right, 'state' is better than 'claim'.) John Stephenson 08:46, 22 July 2007 (CDT)
- John, perhaps it does have a place in the article. The question which remains unanswered is why is this important but the pictures of swooning masses in Eastern Europe and Armenia mobbing Bush with joy and love are not in the article. I don't think either one is newsworthy. This is because every public figure has supporters and every public figure has detractors. More importantly a picture of one faction or another gives and impression which may or may not represent reality.
- As a resident of the Washington DC area, I can tell you that I can't remember a day when there wasn't a protest at the Whitehouse. Sometimes there are more than one protests at the same time. Sometimes there are rallies. When you see them in person the protest looks impossibly small like 20 people (10 of whom are 100% pure nutflake). Then you go home and watch the exact same protest on the evening news and the camera angle gives a totally different impression. You can't see the people playing frisbee nearby, the homeless man who is there ever day and the taxi picking up a fare. Once ever 5 to ten years you see something like the Million Man March (about 100,000) or a massive anti-abortion protest (bussed in church groups) or the Hispanic rally before the immigration debates. When you see the shot from a helicopter, it's a newsworthy protest. When you can see the people's faces and read their signs, it's probably a half-dozen kooks. That doesn't mean that many people don't agree with the kooks. It just means, the protest isn't that big a deal. Anyway, thanks for the (albeit grudging) admission above. ;^) Will Nesbitt 09:11, 22 July 2007 (CDT)
Analysis & Justification of a Deletion
I think a good many conservatives are disappointed with the Bush presidency because Bush is a "compassionate conservative", i.e. a liberal, when it comes to government spending. There is a good deal of analysis that indicates that Republican spending had as much to do with Republican losses in the House & Senate, as Iraq. This analysis might not be correct, but it's out there. Therefore, since the experts can't agree on why Democrat gains in the House and Senate were made, I think we should be careful to avoid conclusions. It might be best to just stay out of the analysis game altogether (because that's where the arguments lurk) and stick with the facts. Will Nesbitt 07:38, 21 July 2007 (CDT)
I tried to edit this sentence:
- Many talk radio hosts who had been staunch Bush supporters turned against him, denounced it as "amnesty," and mobilized Republican opinion against the measure.
But I couldn't find a way to both report a good many facts relevant to this sentence without ballooning the verbiage and thereby implying that the topic is more important than other subjects covered in a single sentence. Without any prosaic artistry here are some facts which I think are relevant to this sentence, but are not mentioned:
- Many talk show hosts are conservatives
- Many conservatives supported the President and the Republican party, but many conservatives are now unhappy with the party because of explosive government spending, lax immigration enforcement, mishandled war efforts
- Every political talk radio program attempts to mobilize opinion about something.
- Talk radio struck a chord with listeners with this particular topic. Many people from diverse political affiliations opposed the proposed legislation
- Many Americans thought of the proposed reforms as "amnesty"
In the end, this issue could be / will be an article in and of itself. On this page it seems to make more sense to avoid political characterizations and stick to the most easily reported facts. Will Nesbitt 07:38, 21 July 2007 (CDT)
One edit away from quitting
An important part of this project is working with others. I would like to collaboratively edit but I am not willing to devote my life to hammering against a brick wall. Will Nesbitt 06:30, 26 July 2007 (CDT)
- Just to drop my 2 cents. It seems the most recent edit war has been in regards to the following statement in the introduction "However, due to the prolonged conflict in Iraq, numerous alleged scandals in the administration and an explosion of government growth and spending, he lost public support and in 2006 the Democratic Party won a majority in both houses of the Congress." I'd have to agree with it's complete removal, atleast from that location, because it seems out of place. If people still feel the need to add the information elsewhere, it should be easy enough to back some of these statements up with public opinion polls and the like.
- Also, I would just like to say to Will, that I don't think you are ever going to find a utopian editing experiece when it comes to controversial articles. Problems may not get solved immediately, but you picking up your ball and going home isn't going to solve the problem either. :) --Todd Coles 10:07, 26 July 2007 (CDT)
Will, how about focusing a while on much less controversial topics? Just a suggestion. —Stephen Ewen (Talk) 12:04, 26 July 2007 (CDT)
- I appreciate the kind words and suggestions from both of you. I don't expect anyone to agree with me, but I do expect either collaboration or a free reign. I've posted my reasons for taking a break on my user page. Will Nesbitt 12:35, 26 July 2007 (CDT)
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I think that this article seems to lack some "warmth" for its subject, perhaps because it lacks any personal biographical details, such as about Bush's childhood and family. It also doesn't really explain why so many voted for Bush, or what qualities he had that made the Republican's choose him.Gareth Leng 16:52, 1 August 2007 (CDT)
- Gareth, political analysts who both like and dislike Bush describe him as having a very high emotional and intuitive intelligence, which isn't really reflected — nor that he tended not to go through decision alternatives as did many other presidents. It's also needful, I think, to establish the roles of Cheney, Rice, and Rove.
- As Will said, public opinion polls, from reputable organizations, are more informative — yet I don't see any. I'm afraid it still gives the sense of a President who might well have been reelected had it not been for silly term limits. Howard C. Berkowitz 00:59, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
Two Small Changes
Now that the man is no longer in office and the controversies (at least on this page) are dying down somewhat, perhaps we might do some editorial revising of this entry? I'm going to risk two small changes to the second sentence: First, U.S. Presidents don't inaugurate; it isn't a transitive verb. They are inaugurated, that is installed in office, by others - specifically the swearing in at a public ceremony by the Chief Justice of the U.S. Supreme court. And, U.S. Presidents aren't just inaugurated in January. The date set by law is January 20.
- Roger Lohmann 12:21, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
And Three More?
- Now, how about another correction? GWB didn't "defeat Al Gore in a controversial election" as the article currently states. The very absence of detail here is prejudicial: All U.S. presidential elections are controversial; that's what makes them interesting. Although the larger meaning is still debated, the facts in this case seem to be missing here are that (1) GWB lost the popular vote, (2) won the electoral college vote (itself not all that unusual a circumstance; it happened before), was subjected to a law suit disputing votes in Florida (the famous "hanging chads" case) and (3) the matter was settled by the U.S. Supreme Court in a case that was itself quite controversial. For purposes of accuracy, the CZ article should allude to these three points, which it is presently silent on. But before adding these changes, I would like to give those who disagree a chance to respond here.
Uncontroversial?
- I'm hoping the strictly wording changes I've made in the third sentence will raise no controversy at all.
Are We Booming Yet?
- In hindsight, the phrase " the boom (and later correction) in real estate" expresses a highly partisan view of the recession that began in 2007. Some restatement is needed, don't you agree?
- Roger Lohmann 12:33, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
Reorganization
I just reorganized the material somewhat (I changed nothing in the text) to make the article more logical. Hope this helps. Michel van der Hoek 23:52, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Iraq War
I've removed the statement
As a result, Iraq has become less acute a topic in US political discourse and some credit Bush with winning a very high-stakes military gamble.
at least without very strong sourcing. Indeed, I've added some sources indicating that there was widespread electoral concern that Bush shouldn't have been in the casino at all. Unquestionably, there are ideologues, discussed in Iraq War and subarticles, who believe it was a wise decision, but the electorate doesn't seem to agree. Howard C. Berkowitz 02:25, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Libby
Howard, I see that you removed part of a sentence about the pardoning of Scooter Libby. I really think that without that qualification the sentence would sound like conservatives are merely whining about Libby's verdict. They may well have, but that's not the point in this article on CZ. The whole argument put forward by Republicans why Libby ought to have been pardoned rather than simply have his sentence commuted, apart from the legal implications (commutation would keep him a convicted felon and lose him his lawyer's license), is that they did not believe any crime occurred, so Libby could not have committed perjury. Whether you agree with this reasoning or not, at least adding these few words puts the thing in context. Since the sentence is presented as an argument from conservatives, readers can be left the freedom to interpret this fact on their own. We're suddenly adding so many details in this article now, can't we add this handful of words too? Michel van der Hoek 20:42, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- Adding so much detail? His education, military service, work in the private sector, and service as governor? One of many examples that Carmona was not the only individual complaining about his interference with science? Actually, I think I'm adding sourcing for what reads as an apologia for Bush. There have been a number of statements about the war and other matters that were flatly opinionated and wrong. I suggest you look at the Iraq War articles in much more detail.
- You reverted "because of the absence of an underlying crime." It's not that simple, and there were multiple charges against Libby, which did not include violation of the Intelligence Identities Protection Act. Since the sentence is presented as an argument from conservatives"--how about naming them?
- The Libby details belong in its own article (or with the Plame matter), not in the George Bush article. The material here is greatly oversimplified, and it is not specific to George Bush. The fact is that George Bush chose not to pardon him. That is what is appropriate in a George Bush article, not what "conservatives" (a term that is used very broadly here) think about it. A President doesn't have to give any reason for a pardon, commutation, or other action that is solely discretionary for him. It's not a Republican or conservative decision, it's a Presidential decision. Perhaps Bush, a genuinely intuitive man, believed, in his heart of hearts, that Libby indeed should lose his lawyer's licence for quite separate reasons. Those "few words" do not put anything in context in my opinion, but, indeed, come across as some partisans — I won't say "conservatives" or Republicans, since some recognized conservatives and Republicans despise Bush (or what he's done to the Party) — are whining about a very ...interesting... legal interpretation, which was not supported by the courts. There is some very interesting sourced material about Rove vs. Frum opinion.
- Howard C. Berkowitz 20:54, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- I really don't mind all the stuff you're adding and I fully agree with you that we ought to balance completeness with overcrowding with facts that belong in other articles.
- As for Libby, I do not quite understand why the words I put back in are such a big deal to you. I think they do put things in the political context of the day. The facts of the criminal case against Libby are that he was charged with several counts of perjury, obstruction of justice and making false statements--all of these charges stem from the impression of federal agents that he was lying about the Plame Affair. Several Republicans and conservatives have commented that Libby had no knowledge about the offense (because there was no offense: Armitage leaked Plame's ID, not the White House) and therefore could not have lied about it. So the whole prosecution was illogical and his conviction was based on statements he made that did not match other people's statements. I don't have any sources ready for this at the moment, but I am sure I can drag them up from my archive somewhere--please be patient, I have a day job too, and I work on all sorts of stuff at the same time. Of course, CZ can make a whole new article about the Plame Affair and be more detailed there.
- I am afraid your next-to-last sentence (previous comment) makes no sense to me (What do you mean?). Michel van der Hoek 21:38, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- In a George W. Bush article, the salient facts about Libby are that he was charged with offenses related to his duties in the Administration, and that Bush commuted his sentences. That's it. The Plame affair actually involved Cheney far more than Bush, which is one reason I think it's overemphasized here and should come out in near-entirety. Argue these points in that article, not here.
- The best solution may be to remove the Libby material completely, or move it to a rough Plame article. I really don't want to argue it here because it's not especially relevant to Bush himself.
- The argument that one cannot commit perjury about a non-crime is not supported in law. Perjury is the act of lying in a judicial process; the facts of the matter need nothing to do with criminal conduct.
- Republicans and conservatives are not monolithic, so when ascribing positions to them, they need to be identified — not necessarily sourced, but at least named. Howard C. Berkowitz 21:56, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Politicizing court decision
in a fractured and highly controversial decision, seven justices on the Court (Rehnquist, Breyer, Kennedy, O’Connor, Scalia, Souter, and Thomas) ruled that the Florida recount could not continue because the state of Florida had failed to set equal standards across the state, granting Bush’s claim that this was a violation of the Equal Protection Clause in the Fourteenth Amendment. More importantly, the five more conservative justices...
Fractured? What's broken? Many decisions are controversial, but, on the information, it can only be said it was a 7-2 vote. I see no reason to add, without sourcing and a reason to use such language, the emotionally laden terms "fractured and highly controversial."
Further, I'm very hesitant to refer to the "five more conservative judges". Supreme Court Justices certainly have tendencies, but I challenge to find any Justice that hasn't, at some time, voted quite at odds with a perceived philosophy.
There are places for labels. This isn't one of them. They seem inflammatory, from the perspective of outrage, rather than informative. Howard C. Berkowitz 23:07, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- The decision is fractured. Have you read it? There are varying alliances of justices on different subquestions the court dealt with. This is not uncommonly called a fractured decision or ruling. To call a ruling controversial is not emotional. Bush v. Gore is a controversial case for many reasons, as anyone who was around in 2000 or the eight years afterwards will remember (I can still hear people talking about the illegitimate president who was handed the presidency by a politicized court--the bumper stickers "Not My President" are also still around). I am not hesitant to use conservative and liberal for the justices. It is not inflammatory, just plain fact. Michel van der Hoek 23:53, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- The decision is the decision. An analysis of it, again, belongs in a separate article. I don't disagree that there are decisions that have subquestions. Look at, for example, Rasul v. Bush, and you'll see unemotional comparisons with Johnson v. Eisentrager and In re Yamashita. There's at least a pink link to Braden. Yamashita isn't in its own article yet, but is discussed in command responsibility.
- This example draws from the document itself. In Kansas v. Crane, there are links to other opinions as well, plus expert testimony from the American Psychiatric Association.
- So, if you want to talk about fracturing, discuss the substance. I've done that. It's entirely possible. If anything, I'm guilty of not supplementing decisions with additional law journal information. Alas, I haven't been able to justify keeping up my associate membership in the American Bar Association, but I still manage to use legal databases. I read lots of decisions, and, indeed, you'll find citations and text in a number I've written at CZ. You will find that I don't discuss the decisions at length in articles on a topic, such as extrajudicial detention, but link. I've been as unemotional as possible, using primary document quotes where available, in things as emotionally laden as decisions on the scope of interrogation techniques, and even the techniques themselves.
- Shall I quote Talleyrand's advice to young diplomats, "Above all, no zeal?" Oh...I just did.
- Want to talk about what you've heard about bumper stickers? Source it. Funny, but I can think of things I've heard that are even more relevant, but I didn't put them into an article -- such as the unforgettable noise of an aircraft smashing into the Pentagon 3.5 miles away from me, or the sad sound of the fighters that showed up a few minutes later.
- Given that we have a to-be-improved article on American conservatism, and no article at all about American liberalism, I would be very, very hesitant to toss around those labels, for justices or others, wheh the labels are not defined.
- Yes, I was around in 2000. I was around for quite a few decisions before that, and, here and there, around for the events...during Watergate, I opened the paper each day to see who I knew that was testifying, and wondering if any friends were about to be indicted. Howard C. Berkowitz 00:14, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
Cheney and al-Qaeda
I do not think the recently added sentence about Cheney's supposed comments about Hussein and al-Qaeda is accurate. Cheney has not disavowed links between Hussein and al-Qaeda. The only thing he is disavowing in this recent interview is an operational link between Hussein and 9/11. But he has never claimed, as far as I know, that Hussein was linked to 9/11, except perhaps in the first few days when the administration discussed possible suspects. The closest that I am aware of that Cheney has come to the alleged operational link between 9/11 and Hussein is saying that in a post-9/11 world Hussein is more dangerous. The CNN article does say explicitly, several times, that Cheney still believes Hussein had ties to terrorists, including to Osama bin Laden. Michel van der Hoek 01:50, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
- Bush especially, and also Cheney and Wolfowitz, believed there were direct links between Hussein and 9/11. Please see Office of Special Plans and Iraq War#Assumed links between 9/11 and Iraq.
- Perhaps, as far as you know, there have never been such claims. Nevertheless, there is abundant reporting, sourced in the articles I mention, that there was an enormous emphasis on finding a linkage between 9/11 and Saddam. I haven't linked all the references I've seen. Bluntly, I'm finding that you seem to be reflexively defending the Bush administration.
- Of course Hussein had ties to terrorism. He rewarded suicide bombers against Israel. He gave sanctuary to terrorists, but there is little evidence he had any operational control, and, on occasion, arrested those that had offended him.
- If Cheney is saying that Hussein had ties to bin Laden himself, Cheney fails to grasp the motivations and ideologies of the two of them. They were natural enemies. Hussein was an exemplar of the corrupt Arab government that al-Qaeda regarded as the "near enemy", to use their term of art. There is evidence that al-Zawahiri talked bin Laden into targeting the "far enemy", or US, as a provocation to accelerate disaffection in the Middle East. It is in the Middle East where bin Laden has spoken of starting to reestablish the Caliphate.
- As a Military Workgroup Editor, I don't think there is any argument that the political leadership of the Bush Administration believed Saddam had an operational role in 9/11. There was significant pressure on the intelligence community to produce it. See Jami Miscik; that's only a small excerpt from Tenet. Howard C. Berkowitz 02:25, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
- Little of this is new to me and none of this is particularly convincing. Bluntly, I am defending the Bush administration because I get annoyed by the many people who can only see the Bush 43 years in the worst possible light. I do not think he was a great success as president, but I certainly do not think he was the worst. I do not think he is evil and I don't think he planned to ruin the US (or that he succeeded in doing so accidentally). I'll admit that some of my comments are put in the role of devil's advocate. Many critics don't know that they're talking about.
- From what I have read (many times over) is that in the early days Rumsfeld and probably Cheney pushed hard to find the smoking gun for 9/11 somewhere in Iraq. That was never found, of course, but they acknowledged that (much too grudgingly). Nor did they ignore other suspects. Wolfowitz's calculation that Iraq should be invaded because it was easier, if it is an accurate representation, would show what an idiot he is. That Hussein and bin Laden were natural enemies and therefore did not have ties is nonsense. Sure they despised each other. I'm sure bin Laden considered Hussein an infidel. That apparently did not stop them from coordinating activities, certainly in the 1990s, because of limited shared goals and mutual enemies. This goes along with the "near" and "far enemy" comment you mentioned. As for Tenet, he is a walking contradiction. He has shown both wisdom and great folly. This means I do not despise him, but he has lost all credibility with me. Michel van der Hoek 03:18, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
- This is a political workgroup article, but you are addressing points abundantly covered in more detailed Military Workgroup articles. If you were to make comments such as Hussein and bin Laden coordinated activities in the 1990s in such an article, I would rule it incorrect. If you were to say that they both collaborated with Hassan al-Turabi, I'd agree, but I can also carefully source that, as well as the reasons for their cooperation with him but not each other.
- Do you see me defending Tenet's wisdom? I am, however, quoting him as a source, confirmed by others, that the White House pressured the Deputy Director of Intelligence, Miscik, of the CIA to produce specific intelligence of cooperation, on 9/11, between Saddam and al-Qaeda.
- I have no idea what your point may be about "near enemy", because Saddam would be exactly the near enemy that bin Laden would have attacked. Saddam did shelter Abu Musab al-Zarqawi, but Zarqawi was explicitly separate from al-Qaeda at the time. It was only after the invasion that al-Zarqawi swore bayat to bin Laden and formed al-Qaeda in Iraq (or, in a more literal and poetic translation, "al Qaeda in the land of the two rivers.")
- Wolfowitz and Feith have never impressed me. On the other hand, who was it that nominated them? It's hard for me to believe that a President does not have some responsibility for the quality of the #2 man in the Pentagon.
- For all you say you have read, you aren't giving links or citations, as I am. "Many critics don't know that they're talking about." Yes, but I do. I think I've demonstrated that in literally dozens of articles. Howard C. Berkowitz 03:40, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
Attorney firings - what is not being addressed
I'm perfectly willing to accept that no laws were broken in firing the attorneys. David Frum has expressed that Rove did great damage, to the long-term future of the Republican party, by concentrating on short-term improvements for elections, for pleasing the "base", and making the consequences of noncompliance clear. Yes, this did give tactical advantages. Yes, it was probably legal.
But when an attorney is fired in the midst of trials, it's disruptive. Frum and other Republicans raise the question if the Bush White House was more concerned with political payoffs and wins than it was with effective governance. Howard C. Berkowitz 21:23, 11 August 2009 (UTC)
- You get no argument from me that the firings were at the very least suspicious, Howard. Everyone should feel free to fill in the gaps, though the bulk of the argument should go in a separate article, I think, or else this will get too long. Michel van der Hoek 01:59, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
Science
It is entirely relevant to mention Obama with respect to Cerf; please put it back. The significance is that Cerf made an issue of the Administration's interference with science in 2004, and still was not acting acceptably in 2008. I do know Vint and have some background on his opinions; he's hardly a Democrat.
This only scratches the surface on administration interference with government science; do you really want to go there? Again, it's another indication of what Frum, a former Bush speechwriter, describes as an obsession with the base and political advantage than good governance. Howard C. Berkowitz 03:17, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
- Can't quite see where you're going with this. Do you want to develop this section? I've been staring at this paragraph for a while now and just couldn't live with the incomplete sentence and the lack of introduction to the topic anymore. I don't see why we have to drag Obama into a discussion about Vinton Cerf but, by all means, add some text and make it clear. I don't know anything about Mr. Cerf other than that he was awarded that medal in 2005. Michel van der Hoek 03:54, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
- I suppose I should do a biographical article, but, as much as anyone, Cerf is the technical father of the Internet. He introduced the idea of interconnecting networks, the catenet, and designed Transmission Control Protocol. It is a well-earned Dr. Cerf; his formal dress belies a very collegial manner.
- The point about Obama is that Bush didn't improve Republican handling of science, in four years, well enough for a once-visible Republican scientist to consider a Republican follower of Bush. Carmona has similar comments about interference, both in suppressing things unpopular with the base and emphasizing faith-based credentials over scientific ones.
- My point, which doesn't seem to be coming across both here and with the attorneys, is that by many sources, this administration put virtually everything on an effective spoils system, sacrificing competent governance in the process. Look at the assignments to the Coalition Provisional Authority, where Republican credentials were more important than knowledge of a subject. Lyndon Johnson may have misled as many people, but, other than in Vietnam, actually ran a government.
- Perhaps if you don't know anything about a subject, you shouldn't be criticizing it. Howard C. Berkowitz 04:10, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
- But I wasn't criticizing this section at all, Howard. Apart maybe from fixing the ungrammatical, incomplete sentences. I don't know much about this angle on the Bush administration, though of course I have read things over the years in the media. So, feel free to develop this section, if you feel like it. However,... I do think that most of this material ought to go in an article George W. Bush, administration rather than in the man's biographical article. It already takes my computer 20 seconds to load this article (and it's not the slowness of my computer). Michel van der Hoek 13:29, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
- When I refer to criticism, I refer to the decision to take out my comment about Obama, and, further, to respond to your apparent brushing off the reference since you weren't familiar with Cerf.
- There are articles that take even longer to load, some of which I've written. When Abraham Lincoln was asked how long a man's legs should be, he replied "long enough to reach from his hips to the ground." Pure length is not a valid criticism of an article, although it's certainly reasonable to make it more navigable by creating subarticles, which would be of George Bush here, not the Administration, and linking to them.
- In this case, the matters with which Carmona and Cerf were concerned represented implementation of Administration policy. As Harry Truman put it with respect to the Presidency, "the buck stops here". A President is personally and ultimately responsible for acts of aides, unless he disavows them immediately. Had Nixon fired Haldeman, Mitchell, Colson, and a few others as soon as the news of Watergate broke, he might be remembered as one of our greatest presidents. I was sitting in a Republican campaign staff meeting when the first reports arrived; I remember the discussion by experienced campaign professionals. Presidents that don't learn that staff are expendable do not tend to be effective; staff that don't understand this don't belong in the White House. LBJ was one of our most complex Presidents, who did very good and very bad things, but, from a political standpoint, he was correct to fire Walter Jenkins, an act that was simultaneously morally reprehensible. Bush did very little firing, and that's not to say he's a bad man — perhaps too nice to be a great President.
- George W. Bush allowed Karl Rove and others to administer guidance over a period of time, which makes him responsible and thus belongs in his biographical article, not George W. Bush Administration; although there can be cross-links.
- Yes, it's longer than it would be on MSNBC or Fox, but this isn't MSNBC or Fox, which at least don't claim to be encyclopedic. Howard C. Berkowitz 16:28, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
- I did not brush off Cerf. I merely admitted ignorance and invited improvements by others more knowledgeable than myself. Michel van der Hoek 20:08, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
- Respectfully, I found it a brushoff when you removed the reference to Obama, admitting ignorance of one of the most influential people in science and engineering, but not knowing why the reference to Obama might be significant. It comes across as reflexive defense of anything that might be critical of Bush or Republicans.
- I would not have had any problem if you had asked, on the talk page, "why is it significant that Cerf endorsed Obama?" It could have been explained that demonstrated Cerf's continued frustration with Republican approaches to science. If need be, that could have gone into the article. Nevertheless, I do not think it was appropriate to remove something where you admit ignorance of it. Ask, don't act; deletions are especially inappropriate in the absence of specific background. Incidentally, Cerf was an adviser on two of my books and I've worked in committees with him for years; I do know something of the specific. There is a great more about the White House and science that can be brought up, which I differentiate from a personal moral decision, if a not terribly informed one, about stem cells. Howard C. Berkowitz 20:45, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
Howard, I find your comments condescending and offensive. I have been careful and civil. My involvement in this whole thing was merely to tighten a brief section that had been left ungrammatical and unconnected. I restored the reference to Obama when you specifically requested it. I admitted ignorance on the specific topic and invited the opinions of betters. Yet I receive from you accusations and long tirades about how inferior my editing is and how smart you are. Fine, so you know more about the specific topic(s) involved; there is still no reason to address me in such a tone about something that can be fixed easily. I am a reasonably intelligent person who has received training in basic research methods. Any reasonable human being might have wondered how necessary it is to bring in Barack Obama in a discussion about a relatively unknown scientist in an article on George W. Bush. No irreparable harm was done by leaving that reference out, especially since I believe the overall effect of my editing, from a purely linguistic point of view, was that of an improvement. There is nothing inappropriate about any of my actions on that front; I do not ask permission for every bit and byte I change on CZ. You need to be grown up enough to communicate such matters in a normal way without getting upset when someone removes a word you happen to like. "If you don't want your writing to be edited by others and redistributed at will, then don't submit it here." Michel van der Hoek 22:59, 12 August 2009 (UTC)