Talk:Peanuts

Article Checklist for "Peanuts"

Workgroup category or categories	Literature Workgroup [Editors asked to check categories]
Article status	Developing article: beyond a stub, but incomplete
Underlinked article?	No
Basic cleanup done?	Yes
Checklist last edited by	Joshua David Williams 11:35, 10 May 2007 (CDT)

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Some issues

Right now the first sentence is in present tense, while the rest in past tense. There should probably be some explanation that Peanuts is still in syndication, but there are no new strips being made. However the tense should be consistent. Also, instead of calling it "a popular, multiple award-winning comic strip," there should be verifiable statements to that effect in the article (what awards?). --Eric Winesett 11:29, 10 May 2007 (CDT)

I'll take a look at the tenses and see if I can fix it. --Joshua David Williams 11:35, 10 May 2007 (CDT)

I've fixed the tenses up a bit. As for the exact awards, I'll have to do some research. I know several of the films won several awards as well.

The article had quite a few extra spaces in it, as though it was written in vi. We're using quite a few parenthesis right now. I think we need to re-word those sections a little bit to make it easier to read. --Joshua David Williams 11:47, 10 May 2007 (CDT)