Talk:Hebrew Bible

Article Checklist for "Hebrew Bible"

Workgroup category or categories	Religion Workgroup, Literature Workgroup [Editors asked to check categories]
Article status	Developing article: beyond a stub, but incomplete
Underlinked article?	Yes
Basic cleanup done?	No
Checklist last edited by	Todd Coles 09:54, 1 August 2007 (CDT)

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Well, at least give me credit for starting the checklist! Anyway, greetings and please have fun with the article. Of course, anyone can edit. However, I would sincerely appreciate it if people not tear apart the opening paragraphs quite yet. Maybe register your complaints and concerns with the opening here. There's so much more to fill in!

Basic orientation -- the article needs to be encyclopedic, but not necessarily boring and conventional. Everyone thinks they know about the Bible, let's try to tell readers some of the unexpected. More importantly, let's try to avoid Religious Points-of-View, which lead to bias, etc. Instead, I suggest a more scholarly apparatus and little or no religious presuppositions. Write as an atheist might about somebody else's religious scripture. For that reason, at least for the first sentence, I use the term 'god' and not God. Of course, 'God' is suitable in giving the reader the Bible's self-description of its creator, deity, and main character.

Since this article is created on the Write-a-thon, I urge people to create spin-off articles linked back to brief summaries under the -- now empty -- many subheadings. Thanks. Good luck! David Hoffman 09:42, 1 August 2007 (CDT)

Hey David, I fixed the checklist for you. I've found it easier to bookmark the checklist page [1] and just copy/paste it onto the talk page and filling it out that way.

I have two comments. First, I think we need to work on the opening sentence and give the reader a stronger definition as to what the Hebrew Bible is. In other words, something like "The Hebrew Bible is the primary religious text for the Jewish religion, and also makes up the Old Testament in the Christian Bible."

Also, I'm confused by some of the subheadings you've laid out. A lot of them refer to "the Bible", which makes me think Christianity. Is this the intent, or would the reader be better served with refering to it as the Hebrew Bible in those headings? Hope that helps. --Todd Coles 09:54, 1 August 2007 (CDT)

Hi David. Excellent start! One thing - the use of the word 'Plot' in a subheading. I would associate this purely with works of fiction. Would it be better to leave that heading just as 'Content Summary'? Anton Sweeney 10:27, 1 August 2007 (CDT)