CZ:Feedback Requests

Have an article that you'd like feedback on? Simply list it here and sign your request. Others will be clued in to which articles need their help. Please offer your feedback on the article's talk page.

Current requests

• Crystal Palace -- An entirely new entry from scratch; would be interested in comments and suggestions, working toward being ready for Approval. - requested by Russell Potter 12:06, 4 June 2007 (CDT)
• Architecture - requested by Dimitris Kottas 12:28, 24 May 2007 (CDT)
• People's Republic of China - (controversial?) - requested by John Stephenson 04:41, 18 May 2007 (CDT)
• Philosophy (talk) - requested by Larry Sanger 11:35, 15 May 2007 (CDT)
• Electoral College (talk) - requested by Anthony Argyriou 13:52, 15 May 2007 (CDT)
• Metal Gear Solid (talk) - requested by Oliver Smith 13:57, 15 May 2007 (CDT)
• Assignment Zero (talk) - ((additionally I wonder if this would be set for approval?)) requested by --Robert W King 14:14, 15 May 2007 (CDT)
• Citizendium (talk) - requested by --Robert W King 14:14, 15 May 2007 (CDT)
• John F. Kennedy {talk) - requested by Yi Zhe Wu 14:33, 15 May 2007 (CDT)
• Sailing; see talk page for those aspects of the page which need expansion due to my lack of knowledge of those aspects - requested by Andrew Fleisher 15:35, 15 May 2007 (CDT)
• Judaism: collaboration with article(s) and help with images - requested by David Hoffman 17:46, 15 May 2007 (CDT)
• Scotland Yard, looking for addition and improvement, and aiming to get this entry to Approved status -- requested by Russell Potter 15:28, 20 May 2007 (CDT)
• History_of_computing (talk) - please look over this new and improved reworking of the article. I peg it at 80% complete or so. --Robert W King 14:25, 16 May 2007 (CDT)
• Bacteriophage Any comments? User:John J. Dennehy
• Michael Gilbert I think I've taken this about as far as I care to. Any comments or edits? Also, I'd appreciate it greatly if someone else would put links around whatever he/she thinks is proper - I'm so shell-shocked by the over-use of links at Wikipedia that I hardly know what to do. Thanks! Hayford Peirce 19:26, 17 May 2007 (CDT)
• Mr. Calder and Mr. Behrens All of my comments above about Michael Gilbert also apply here. Hayford Peirce 19:26, 17 May 2007 (CDT)
• Two templates, one for timelines and the other for the Chemistry workgroup. --Robert W King 12:40, 24 May 2007 (CDT)
• Artificial intelligence - I see that this article has three categories listed (Computers, Robotics and Philosophy). The first two are obviously appropriate, and the this seems sensible, too, but I'm not a philosophy editor. Could we have a philsophy editor weigh in on whether philosophy should be included? Greg Woodhouse 21:26, 24 May 2007 (CDT)
• Marijuana - requested by Yi Zhe Wu 15:28, 29 May 2007 (CDT)
• Shirley Chisholm - requested by Yi Zhe Wu 15:28, 29 May 2007 (CDT)
• Bread - I have extensively rewritten the first paragraph; earlier I did extensive cutting; can the Wiki checkmark now be removed?

Completed requests

• Michael Gilbert could someone add the correct Copyright and/or licensing info on the image Image:Smallbone_Deceased_cover.jpg I've just added? Thanks!

I have addressed. Stephen Ewen 16:50, 18 May 2007 (CDT)

• Ireland (state) (talk) - requested by Anton Sweeney 11:49, 15 May 2007 (CDT)

I've given some ideas on the talk page. Oliver Smith 14:26, 15 May 2007 (CDT)

• Northwest Passage: a look-over with an eye toward getting this all-new entry ready for Approval -- requested by Russell Potter 12:25, 16 May 2007 (CDT)

Passed with flying colors. Matt Innis (Talk) 15:30, 29 May 2007 (CDT)

• Penguin (word) - I am considering tagging this for deletion on grounds of CZ:Maintainability but would like to have the input of others before I take any action; see discussion at Talk:Penguin (word). -- Update: issue resolved, text re-integrated with Penguin. Russell Potter 23:16, 3 June 2007 (CDT)