Owens Lake: Revision history

28 March 2023

• curprev 07:1807:18, 28 March 2023‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 14,360 bytes +48‎ Text replacement - "Los Angeles" to "Los Angeles"

8 March 2023

• curprev 15:5215:52, 8 March 2023‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 14,312 bytes +24‎ Text replacement - "California" to "California"

25 February 2023

• curprev 15:2815:28, 25 February 2023‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 14,288 bytes +21‎ Text replacement - "Arizona" to "Arizona"

10 February 2023

• curprev 10:0510:05, 10 February 2023‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 14,267 bytes +9‎ Text replacement - "U.S. Navy" to "United States Navy"

2 February 2023

• curprev 14:0914:09, 2 February 2023‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 14,258 bytes +11‎ Text replacement - "United States" to "United States of America"
• curprev 11:4711:47, 2 February 2023‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 14,247 bytes +11‎ Text replacement - "[[United States|" to "[[United States of America|"

3 December 2011

• curprev 03:5603:56, 3 December 2011‎ imported>Chunbum Park‎ m 14,236 bytes +14,236‎ →‎Water for Los Angeles
• curprev 03:5003:50, 3 December 2011‎ imported>Chunbum Park‎ m 14,230 bytes −11‎ →‎Water for Los Angeles
• curprev 03:4403:44, 3 December 2011‎ imported>Chunbum Park‎ m 14,241 bytes +14,241‎ →‎History
• curprev 03:4203:42, 3 December 2011‎ imported>Chunbum Park‎ m 14,235 bytes −2‎ →‎History

2 December 2011

• curprev 20:3120:31, 2 December 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 14,237 bytes +3,695‎ →‎Air pollution: added comma as a comma goes after a full date

8 February 2011

• curprev 20:0020:00, 8 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 14,222 bytes +385‎ →‎Air pollution: Minor copy edit for clarity
• curprev 19:5219:52, 8 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 14,180 bytes +185‎ →‎History: Minor copy editing for clarity.
• curprev 19:1119:11, 8 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 14,142 bytes +147‎ Did some rewriting as per Milton -- hope that what I've written is accurate
• curprev 18:2818:28, 8 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 13,995 bytes +158‎ →‎Air pollution: Added one more sentence.
• curprev 15:5915:59, 8 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 13,837 bytes +272‎ Added another reference
• curprev 15:3715:37, 8 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 13,565 bytes +3,185‎ Added test, photos and references updating to current conditions. Also reworked the past editions . See Talk page for rationale.

4 February 2011

• curprev 17:0917:09, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 10,381 bytes +1‎ →‎History
• curprev 17:0617:06, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 10,380 bytes +8‎ →‎History: presumably; thanks for 'lines' explanation
• curprev 14:1114:11, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,372 bytes −49‎ rewrote another sentence
• curprev 14:0914:09, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,373 bytes −4‎ forgot to delete another word
• curprev 14:0814:08, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,377 bytes −44‎ I don't see why we need the words "state lines" in the first place
• curprev 14:0714:07, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 10,421 bytes −121‎ Ro, "state line" simply means "boundary line" and it is a singular noun rather than plural. Lake Tahoe's east shore is in Nevada, west shore in California.
• curprev 13:3813:38, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 10,393 bytes +118‎ I'm a foreigner, & I don't understand this location
• curprev 12:4812:48, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,389 bytes +114‎ Put, in the lede, where it should be in any newspaper article, the *reason* Owens Lake is worthy of inclusion here.
• curprev 12:4312:43, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,275 bytes −267‎ removed some text from lede -- this article is about Owens Lake, not Tahoe
• curprev 12:1512:15, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 10,542 bytes +1,330‎ No edit summary
• curprev 12:1412:14, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 10,537 bytes −8,518‎ Rewrote akward sentence and gave a location from Reno, NV
• curprev 02:1402:14, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 10,245 bytes 0‎ Reduced the image size a teensy bit so that "(particulate matter)" isn't on the lede's last line all by itself. Just a style thing.
• curprev 00:2300:23, 4 February 2011‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,245 bytes +35‎ rewriting the lede again, forgot to save it the first time

3 February 2011

• curprev 19:5819:58, 3 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 10,210 bytes −8,845‎ Removed the EPA Questions and Answers section. See the Talk page for rationale.
• curprev 15:3815:38, 3 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 19,055 bytes +9,843‎ →‎Air pollution
• curprev 14:0414:04, 3 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 21,991 bytes +11,781‎ →‎Air pollution
• curprev 00:3000:30, 3 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 10,210 bytes −29‎ Shortened the coding of yet another reference.
• curprev 00:1100:11, 3 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 10,239 bytes +331‎ Changed occurrences of PM 10 or PM-10 to PM₁₀ which is the usual symbol.
• curprev 00:0100:01, 3 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 10,178 bytes +270‎ Adding 2010 nonattainment info

2 February 2011

• curprev 23:5723:57, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,788 bytes −117‎ Shortened coding of 2 more references. Also tightened up the edit page to delete space between sentences.
• curprev 18:3018:30, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 9,905 bytes −3‎ seems to be 1 word
• curprev 15:5815:58, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,908 bytes 0‎ Shortened coding for another reference
• curprev 14:2714:27, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,908 bytes +729‎ →‎Air pollution: Adding updated info
• curprev 03:2303:23, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 9,179 bytes −267‎ Revised about another half of the references to use much shorter coding so that the Edit page is more easily read. Finished with this now.
• curprev 02:1602:16, 2 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,446 bytes −35‎ Revised about half of the references to use much shorter coding so that the Edit page is more easily read.

1 February 2011

• curprev 16:0316:03, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,577 bytes +96‎ →‎Air pollution: Fixed 2 wiki links
• curprev 16:0116:01, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 9,577 bytes −2‎ →‎Air pollution
• curprev 15:5415:54, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 9,579 bytes +88‎ Minor modification to clarify the PM-10 emissions numbres
• curprev 13:1613:16, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,491 bytes +11‎ →‎Air pollution
• curprev 12:1512:15, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,480 bytes −1‎ →‎Air pollution: correcting typo
• curprev 11:1811:18, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 9,481 bytes +269‎ No edit summary
• curprev 09:5709:57, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Peter Schmitt‎ m 9,481 bytes +269‎ missing bracket
• curprev 09:5609:56, 1 February 2011‎ imported>Peter Schmitt‎ 9,479 bytes +32‎ →‎Los Angeles: title